Reviews for DNA Catastrophe 2: Too Far Gone to Heal
NyanWolf chapter 16 . 1/2/2016
Happy New Year! And this chapter was the perfect ending! Squirrel Girl was hilarious, and Deadpool was super cool as always. Danny was amazingly sweet, I love him so much! But then I read the cliffhanger part and now I'm very intrigued! I'll go vote on the pole, so it's official, but I think you should make a third!
MonkeyGirl13 chapter 16 . 1/2/2016
Please write the next book please
Nobel Six chapter 16 . 1/2/2016
I think that was a perfect ending. I can't wait for the third story
Nobel Six chapter 15 . 11/19/2015
It's so perfect. I want more so badly, it's one of the best stories I've read. Two thumbs way up
NyanWolf chapter 14 . 11/10/2015
Super good, as usual! I like the combination thing, that's quite interesting, and I feel bad for Alice's dad! Her use of the money is awesome, maybe there is still some kindness in her! I hope she doesn't follow through on her plan! Excellent chapter, I need to find out more!
Nobel Six chapter 14 . 11/9/2015
Can't wait to see what Alice does. You got me hooked my friend. Two thumbs way up
DuneCat chapter 13 . 11/6/2015
AMAZING! But that's the usual. It seems like your writing has evolved a tad, and you're adding more detail to it. TOTALLY A FAN! It didnt take much to suck me back into the story and I have greeted it like an old friend. Keep up the fabulous work because, well, it's awesome and you're awesome. Very excited for my next chapter!
NyanWolf chapter 13 . 11/6/2015
Ooh! I loved this chapter! Awesome work, Alice is changing and developing so well! A lot of people try to force their characters to just inexplicably change overnight, you have a really good pace.
Nobel Six chapter 13 . 11/6/2015
Very good work my good friend. You've earned two thumbs up
Nobel Six chapter 12 . 10/15/2015
Excellent work my friend. You portrayed Crusader perfectly, and I love Alice even more. You earned two thumbs way up
NyanWolf chapter 11 . 9/24/2015
Wow. I know for a fact I've said this before, but this story always makes me happy! I haven't really been on Fanfiction as much as I wanted to lately and this is the first time in months that I've visited the page, and seeing your story up here was a very awesome thing to come back to.
Nobel Six chapter 11 . 9/22/2015
Who was the person with the book? Other than that mystery great job
NyanWolf chapter 10 . 8/18/2015
YYYYAAAAAYY! Another marvelous update! This chapter was so sad, but so very cool! Most writers love their characters so much that whenever something traumatic happens they don't let it affect the character at all. Which is super unrealistic. But you show all the effects of what Alice is going through and it just makes the story pop! I love it! I'm super excited for the next chapter!
Nobel Six chapter 10 . 8/18/2015
I feel so sad for Alice
Nobel Six chapter 9 . 8/13/2015
Awesome job, love it. Love the story, I've never seen this before on such a great level
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