Self inserts suck first person sucks switching between first and third sucks poor grammar sucks. "I poured myself a drink and drunk a little. How about I poured my self a drink and drank a little still poorly worded but grammatically correct nonetheless. A better sentence would be I poured my self a drink then took a sip.

Update this! Its really good, I like how you put your oc in the episodes of season 1 very awesome.