This is awesomely twisted! I love this!

Huh. Wonder why he didn't bring her with him...huh. Wow. That was interesting, believable, and well-written. O.O Gg, author, gg. :D *waves*

EPIC!

Maybe if you write more stories with Kama in them, you can make her a bit nicer? *wink wink nudge nudge* Or just leave her as she is; Kama is good at being the bad guy (but still a half-way decent human being, sometimes).

i love it ... and at the same time i worry for you writing this but.. oh well i got a good read so please keep up the great work

I'm so dumb, I haven't realised you had posted this. Not exactly a good Kama but I suppose she has her happy ending

Read this for the sixth time and it's still as awesome as hell.

I love Kama!~ Thanks for this!:D

lol *writes... ends up with still evil Kama*

Wow... the things she'd do just to welcome her father back. I love your stories and I love how you write. It's simply amazing :D

Beautiful story. It's a pity its so short but I liked it all the same

Aw, that was heartwarming

(goes read Monster now)

loved it! I actually really enjoyed this, because well; there are not a lot of good fics that have orochimaru as the antagonist as a main theme. But this one you made konoha the antagonist and I really liked how it was portrayed and how Kama really gained all of that influence.

hey at least it helps Konoha...a bit

Good Kama... I don't see that much or a difference between this Kama and the other Kama. XD Gosh, I love Kama.