This was good.

Just a nibble at the ears...and a lick...massage lightly after we cover ourselves in heat and sweat and...other things. So the tid-bits in the heat of it, Hilarious. "After the fact", I nearly woke my roommate and his new gf up; nearly peed myself. Also, you nearly made me cry with that extra bit about Dorian. It's official, I'm giving up on The Iron Bull romance and likely Dorian too. This is just too beautiful to not personally consider cannon. I'm in for the long haul and I'm sharing this with my sister. She's more into the girl-on-girl action but she loves The Iron Bull despite not having the computorial capabilities to actually play the game. I've sated her with Youtube videos, a character made in her name, and the books and comics but I feel she needs this in her life. I love you, sweetheart and we need to make some beh-bez together soon. UGH! I'M SPENT! Tah, Darling.

..."predatorial grin"..."boiling granite"...You are TWISTING my stomach into IMPOSSIBLE knots! Aside from the usual missed period and switched letters, I can't find a thing wrong with this and it's DESTROYING my composure. I may need some private time for this next chapter but the foreplay of words in this, my only concern is you failed to comment on Dorian's more visual "arousal". "Bulge" and "package", darling, would have been chaste enough if smut isn't your flavor. So off I go to read chapter 2, "post haste".

Wow this is really well-written and super steamy! Keep up the truly awesome work!

... forsee yummy things about to happen. Half naked Cullen is only one of them :}

Congratulations!

Hey it's good to see you back!

OH. MY. GOD...8D

I'LL JUST GO PICK THE PIECES OF MY HEAD UP OFF THE FLOOR... CUZ THIS STORY BLEW MY MIND!

This is the hottest fanfic I've ever read.
Bless thee.
The only problem I had was the occasional...creative words for certain body parts. I love laughing while reading about sex.

The part with Dorian's knees over Bull's horns was lava hot. The scene has taken over part of my brain and shows no sign of moving on.

So, before this I never ever shipped them. Liked them, of course, (they're adoribull anyway) but never shipped them. You managed to change that. It's a wonderful story, I can easily imagine them having this kind of a relationship, teasing and then comforting each other, I loved it!

I would have set Varric's shoes on fire for talking so much.

Holy FUCK. This is HAWT.

This was sooo good. The characters were on point, their bickering was hilarious, and the sex was just plain sexy. These two are so cute together, and you write the pair incredibly well (plus you seem to have a knack for mixing in humor with smut, which I personally love). Please continue this story soon!