I like the ideas you have going here. Jihiro has a vary interesting character, I get the feeling she still kinda has her original personality at some points but her being a human caused her to change. Shes not annoying, actually I think her laid back additude is charming, but be careful not to overdo it or she will cross the annoying oc line.

On a side note, love how you portrayed Hiei, rude, standoffish and a hint of madness.

Love this chapter, I can't wait for more!

Hope you update soon! I love the story so far!

Oh I hope you decide to continue this even though not many people read yu yu hakusho fanfiction anymore! Also it's been awhile since I've seen such an innovative idea for a fanfiction, keep up the good work!

To lazy to log in. But let's just say I really like how this is going. I have yet to see a of here that uses a bow so I wonder how you will use her. And I just love the way Jihiro will not really call herself that name or wild mane. Its a really sad way to look at it but it sounds like she lost both identifies and will sometimes speak on third person
And she was a cannibal!? That's crazy! Especially since she talks about it as if it was nothing. I love how she talks about humans tasting like pork. Btw is that true? Did you look it up? Please please please update soon!