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my gosh this the most funniest chapter everＯ()Ｏ

I love the chapter! But this whole chapter I couldn't stop thinking, what if NotJulie had succeeded in breaking het mind and Enma had found an empty Tomo? Gods I'm angst addicted!

I know this is unrelated, but when I read to the all-loving god, I was instantly reminded of a certain OC in the fanfic Kyoko. XD

I realy love how you left out stuff, like usually reincarnated story like this usually have the oc wondering too much, or pondering too much. especially the usually fantastical apperance of an angel, or death, or God, or even an ancestor told the oc what to do. and a backstory like how oc is very attached to the khr series or how he/she knew it. I meant, such thing usually will be forgotten once the oc becomes alive in the khr world, right? (except if the angel showed up again, which rarely) this kind of background story sometimes turned out very interesting, but I found many fail or just okay, it didn't change anything if I just skipped the part. Sometimes it even bug me, or too lazy to read hehe.
you also just straightly have Tomo met Mami and soon the rest of the family, no batshit or whatever. But at the same time it felt just right, no rushed.
Maybe you can't say Tomo doesn't seem much alive, the way she accepted just everything and went with the flow, but in my opinion it's so fit her cause she's a spirit. A spirit supposed to be a litte detached and maybe it's her response of shock, like everything doesn't dwell on her yet, but she will come eventually. And her acceptance and care of the mission is as expected of a guardian angel. Overall, her first impression is okay and readers are left to hold their opinion of her until later chapter. Somehow I can sense a great oc ahead.
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well, maybe you didn't planned this to turn out this way (cause you seem to want to write more, but couldn't or didn't?) but I think this turned out well.
you captured readers' attention with straight to the point start, but you left bait there and there so we can't stop reading. even if you didn't continue this style in later chapters, it won't matter. as for me, I am already captured by the story.

Poor bya-kun...

*squeals* YAS! FANSERVICE! WOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

"stares at ch 1" Eh, fuck it. I need to distract myself and I can wait.

oh my god this chapter was funny! I couldn't stop laughing when mukuro said that hibird finally had a revelation XD

Welcome back! I understand what you're going through COMPLETELY. So honestly, take your time. Don't sweat it. We'll be here when you get back.
Keep calm, do what you need to do.
We'll be here :)
Good luck

Nooooooo...
Rewrites...
Pls update soon.. D:

I'm so happy you're back! This story was like one of my favorites, it was such a good surprise to receive an email with this update! Please take your time, I'll be here waiting to read whatever you post 3 oh and I'll definitely read the story all over again cause it's so good! I'm glad to hear you're doing fine! Stay happy :))

Oh, so he thinks they're her family, or does he just want to be blood related to her?

The real question is: will she still be able to go to him when he can't see her anymore? Also, what is the age limit on seeing her?

Is her ring technically a hell ring?