That was cuter than the cutest freaking buttons! That was adorable! I loved how you got Kyoko's way of speaking, and how you got how Homura normally acts but then added a pleasant twist. I love KyoHomu and this was one of the cutest one-shots in forever. Or should I say ferever. Haha. I would mind seeing a multichapter story from you since you seem to capture their characters quite well.

I love the KyoHomu ship so much. This was so cute.

Not bad for a first fic! Cute!