BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THAT'S SO GOOODD! I love the idea where she made two "Children"! Hats off to you sir!

Love your work! Some fics make me smile, some fics make me misty eyed. Yours did both. More please.

What about halo 5?

It's not often that fanfics can make me want to cry. Well done.

This was one of the cutest stories I read, lol. Loved it.

I DEMAND CONTINUATION!

Really, this is great work. I read it over and over again for like 20 minutes after the first time I saw it. You should continue it.

I had really hoped that John would have told her, at the last moment. This story was equal parts amazing and sad, thank you for writing it.

This is a masterpiece. Small though it is. I wish there were more fics in which there were AI children of Cortana and John. Any though to expanding it further with the release of Halo 5?

I love this story! It's very well-written and the idea is great.
I wish there were more fanfics like this in the fandom!

I really liked this one. I may not have liked that Cortana died in this, but I liked the gift you had her give to John at the end. All in all, the kind of happy/sappy mushy stuff that I really enjoy, kinda like how I enjoyed The Parallel and Stranger Things. Thank you for writing this.

I really enjoyed reading this! I loved the amount of detail and thought you put in the story and characters. I look forward to reading more, or something similar to this.

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