This story is actually starting out really good. Glad I came apon it when I did.

Please update. I'm begging you!

Cana: *appears out of nowhere* HA I KNEW IT!
Nalu: Since when we're you awake?
Cana: My romantic moment sense was tingling like Spider-Man

BLUHUHUHU NALU GONNA HAPPEN

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE! ITS BEEN A YEAR!

Loved the story sad thats it all done

Fabulous beginning! I’m normally not a fan of dark fiction, but your work seems to be an exception... (Good job, that’s not something I say lightly for dark stuff). Also, high school fics can be tricky since they’re so popular, but I like your take so far and I look forward to reading more!

And me too Author~Chan

Wow! Great chapters! This actually almost made me cry. I kinda wish that there was more of a Nalu moment, but maybe that's just me XD
Great story! Loved it all the way through!

Please continue! There is so much more to this story so please don't let this be the end! What about Virgo, will Lucy ever rescue her and also what about Jude? What will Lucy and Natsu's relationship be like after this step? How will their friends react?

Omg I love how Mavis was so chill in chapter 2 like "don't defy caught"

OMG HAHAHAHA HIS ANDE ME AUGH SOOOOO HARD

beautiful! I love it! so awesome! please write a sequel, or more of this one instead.

Wow amazing...It's cool fanfic

Plllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaase updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate

Cant wait for the next chapter I love this story