Meh story is fucking meh.

So cute! I love the fluffiness!

A nice little story.

Really great :)

No flames needed; that was too cozy. Sera/Adaar is my favorite, and those were very nice little vignettes. Don't know what else to say, but that was good, concise but imaginative prose, good subject matter, and good expanding on their relationship. I would have appreciated more of it in the game :( but this rocked too!

Very cute! My only thing is that Krem's a dude.

Ahh I love fluffy filled fics with all the characters relaxing.
This was adorable, Skyhold needs more vacation days. The only critique I can add is when the characters talk, make sure to put the comma IN the quotations, and not outside.

"...if maybe not as attractive", the elf muttered" would be "...if maybe not as attractive," the elf muttered,"

Also, Krem is a man, not a woman.

Other than that, wonderful! Happy Holidays :)

this was really cute
but you used the wrong pronoun for Krem