Reviews for Promised Land
eragon95159 chapter 4 . 3/24
Continue and update soon please. Maybe after her hair on head grow back she keep them in pixie cut. Make she save Stark family and North become neutral in war four more.
GUEST chapter 4 . 7/15/2019
As a Christian, I have wondered how I would react if I wound up stuck in Westeros. This story is ,wow, just wow. Thank you
BrySt1 chapter 4 . 7/6/2019
I'm so in love with this! I can't wait to read more!
Carly Carnations chapter 4 . 5/29/2019
it really must sting to die for your faith and not end up in your heaven, let alone in an entirely different world.

I'm interested to see how she explains herself to mormont though
SunshineBubbles chapter 4 . 5/18/2019
Cool story hope to see more
MrCcoz chapter 4 . 1/6/2019
I am pleasantly surprised by this story. The concept was unique and I took a chance. I'm glad I did. Hopefully you will continue Bess's story. You are a good writer.
kai-baekyun98 chapter 4 . 9/8/2018
interesting story can't wait for more
WyldwoodFaye chapter 4 . 8/21/2018
I am SO glad that you are continuing this story! I was sorely disappointed that an excellent writer with a very interesting premise for their story had (seemingly) abandoned that story. This story was one that I couldn’t forget, although I was only given a few chapters. And now I am so grateful that you have updated! Looking forward to your next chapter!
Witchbitch chapter 3 . 8/4/2018
Bro bro BROOOOOOO THIS REAlLY GOOD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT STOP THIS ITS REALLY GOOD
Bel chapter 4 . 4/16/2018
This is such a freaking interesting take on the “falling into Westeros” concept! You’re writing Bess’s reactions to the whole thing realistically and in a way that makes me really sympathize with her, and it’s very enjoyable to read. The fact that she’s experiencing a moment of weakness and struggle but still shows here and there that she is, in fact, a strong character who can pull through this is also! So refreshing. And I loved her interaction with ghost, and I cannot wait to see what happens now that Bess will be forced to tell the truth — or whatever she can pass for the truth, that is! Great job and looking forward to the next chapter!
guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
ATP the vast majority of Native americans died off due to various diesease accidently introuduced by the Euorpeans. Others either fled west or were abosobed by the Europeans.
Saitama-sama chapter 4 . 3/15/2018
Great chapter, as always. Can't wait for an update!
Foxtrotoscar chapter 4 . 3/15/2018
I’m really like bess’ development so far I can’t wait to see how it will progress
ATP chapter 4 . 3/15/2018
Your OC is weak and has no knowledge about ASoIaF - so maybe slice-of-life? that could be good
story about her small life.
About evil Catholic - protestant really was much at americas - Spain was catholic,so
indian could be beaten or enslaved,but survived - and mexico is now metis land.
British colonists? they survived becouse Potohawanks saved them - and they genocided them
for their same goes for all Atlantic shore is white country becouse
white protestant settlers killed local indians - and mexico is metis country becouse white catholic
settlers did not genocide their indians.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2018
Yo, ATP, you do know that one wrong does not negate another, right? I say this as a Catholic. There's no need to try to "one-up" one atrocity by bringing up another. They were BOTH horrible and there's nothing wrong with the author choosing to use a Protestant victim instead of Catholic ones. But since you brought up the many Catholic deaths brought about by Elizabeth, I guess I'll bring up the thousands of deaths that the Catholic Church has caused over the centuries. Come on, the past is in the past and we cannot change it. Our Church's hands aren't clean either; you know that. All we can do is make sure further genocides don't occur in the future.
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