oh god

:)

I think I'm going to start writing letters that no one will ever receive. Yes. That would most certainly help me resolve my issues without the need to rant to deaf ears.

Oh nazz, he'll forgive you

Ohhhh my goooood why would you do this to me. Why. Ow, my heart. Ugh, I love it so much, though! It's usually Nazz pining after Kevin, which I'm sure you know. It threw me for a loop, that first paragraph; I had to read it twice to understand, but only because my expectations were so different. I love this a lot. The style is very interesting and unique. If I had to make a suggestion, it might be to make it more rambly? Because emotions? If that makes any sense, haha, but that's just one way of looking at it. I'm sad you only have two things posted, you should write more!

Wow.
That was so incredibly emotional. There was no dialogue, not much back story and hardly any settings... but damn. I am honestly upset over this. I think everyone who has ever been heartbroken can relate to this, and its really hard to see Nazz go through this.. Jealousy is a really hard thing to get over, especially when you're so connected like she is. Poor thing.
On a more constructive note, I really liked the way you set this up. Diary letters is something I havent seen before, and I loked how you directed Nazz's attention from her best friend to her crush. I don't think I've ever read a story with kind of love triangle, either!
Good jon, hon. Very well done.