Beautiful of course

*freaks out* Okay, I was super excited when I got an alert for a new work by you. I was triple excited when, opening it, I saw it was for Peter Pan. When I followed the link to your story...you could knock me over with a feather when I saw it was for me! I don't know what I've done to deserve this, but thank you so much!

And this is a beautiful gift. The atmosphere and deceptions felt magical. I felt like I right beside Wendy, experiencing her feelings and thoughts. Her moment with Nana made me chuckle, and felt like it was something J. M. Barrie could have written himself. That last line was lovely. My favorite moment was believing that as Wendy was gazing at the Never Star (excellent name!) thinking of Peter, he, too, was looking at the same star and thinking of her.

Thank you for the lovely journey this story me on. Great job done!

P.S. No need to apologize! Sometimes I feel my shorter stories take as long to write as my long ones.