Emily really is self centered. Ali is going through so much but all emily thinks about is that Alison broke her heart bullshit. Why would she wanna stick around people who betrayed her multiple times. People who no matter how much she proves it they won't look past their own issues to see that she isn't as bad as they think.

OMG WTF IS THIS I LOVED EVERY EFFING WORD OMG OMGEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! I SAW THIS FIC ON A LIST OF RECOMMENDED FANFICS AND I AM SOOOO GLAD I TOOK A CHANCE ON IT! YOU HAVE SET THE BAR AND STANDARD FOR EMISON FICS FOR ME! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! EVERYBODY WAS IN CHARACTER, THE STORY AND DEVELOPMENTS WERE COMPLEX, AND YOU ARE JUST AMAZING AT WRITING A BELIEVABLE FICTION OF THIS FANDOM AND COUPLE! HONESTLY, THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO VERYYYYYYY MUUUUUUUUUCH FOR PUBLISHING THIS STORY!

Also, random af, but i couldn't help but just think the whole time that ali kissed emily literally less than 30 mins after she had puked LOL kinda gross hahahaah but i ignored it for the sake of romance xD

also i'm rly freaking anxious because did Ali ACTUALLY survive the fire or was it courtney that they found alive and took to the hospital!? is ali dead?! or are they both alive?! or is it REALLY ali and now i have no clue how the story will proceed?! you have me on the edge of my seat; onto read the sequel now

Love

Hey I know this is delayed cause you've been writing for Emison forever but I just wanted you to know that I really appreciate and love your writing with them! You embody them so well while staying so true to their characters- a true literary gift. You are an absolute artist. Thank you for continuing on in this fandom and thank you for keeping Emily and Ali alive. It means the world to us. I hope you write again soon. XO

This was so good... and sad... and crazy. Loved it!

Awesome! I love it! Love every piece of the story! Amaizing! Please continue! I can't wait to read another awesome chapter!

Loved this story, I've never read anything to do with the twins from the books before, and I love the switch that took place here. I wish I could find more stories like this one!

This was so intense. I love angsty Emison. I love Courtney's character because I've read the books (though roles were reversed here, haha). Your writing is always good and it never fails to amaze me. Time to read the continuation!

NOOOOOOOO WHYFUCKYOUWTFSHDJHFJBHBHBD

why would you do that to me. that wasn't remotely funny. at all.

What is this magnificent one-shot and why haven't I read it all these months? *wondering while frantically searching for the sequel*
Amazing writing! Brilliant story!

This is absolutely perfect! I have no words. You are the best Emison writer ever! :)

I need moreeee, ali backkkkkkkk

I am actually hysterically crying right now. this is such an upsetting yet amazing fabric. I love your stories so much. keep up the good work

Your stories are what make the crap happening on the show bearable. Mermaid was the first fanfic I ever read and is to date my favourite. Breathe Again is even better. I could never have imagined anything better than Mermaid! I wish you were one of the writers on the show. Or are you :)