You sure did a good job on this. You made my heart race more than once.
Judging by the date of publishing, it’s been a while, but why stop? This story is so damn good. It is honestly better than most and I’m surprised by the fact that I’m enjoying a story as much as I’m enjoying this one. Keep up the good work will you?
- Synne

plz update

plz update this... where's the next part?

WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED?!

I like this. It's a very complex and interesting story. Please update soon!

Wonderful writing and plot. I really like how you've developed the relationship between Ollie and Roy. Very interesting and... Tasteful. The first encounter between the two was pretty interesting to say the least, and I wouldn't mind more tension as such being implemented in the story. ;) Protective Roy with a temper - definitely tantilizing and alluring. A confused Oliver that refuses to believe something between them is going on is also a nice twist in the plot. Really loving this fic and hope to see it continue!

i woulda liked to see an even more furious roy- the description/length of roy's trip from secret headquarters to save oliver was a bit too long.

roy's got this primal/instinct to protect/possess/be with oliver_ seeing what these bitches did to his oliver- i expected roy to grab one of the girl's by the hair/head & literally tear her head off of her body- then he swings the decapitated head like a bolo- & let's it fly right at the other girl's head- it hits with such force that the decapitated head explodes on contact with the other girl's head- the other girl's head splits/cracks open- & her brain is jettisoned out of her skull & splattered against a wall. roy then rips the round saw blade off of the sawing machine- flings it like a discus/frisbee_ & it slices/decapitates the man's head off of his body. roy has all 3 of them headless/dead within 90 seconds of tearing the door off & entering the room.-roy becomes the knight in shining armor- coming to ollie's rescue.
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So I left a review on your old story of this and told them about what happened with your account info. Not sure if anyone's read it, but hopefully you will get more readers on this so it can get popular again

I like it so far - unfortunately, gorey descriptions and weird villans are part of the Arrow unisvers... as long as we get a good Roy/Oliver happy ending ;)

I actually can't get into my account right now either so I feel your pain :(. But this story has a lot of potential so I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with it.

You are back! :) love the new chapter and accidents happen no need to apologize ;)

More more more! Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Liane

You have a really good handle on each character's speech pattern. I can hear the dialogue clearly as I read.

Liane

Ooo! Yay, first kiss! Go, Roy!

Liane

You really nailed how great Thea is with Roy- to a point. I think his confession would have rattled a saint!

Liane