please update soon

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

A story of exceptional quality and intriguing what ifs. I hope you're continuing this story, even if writing a summary of the plot. Thanks for your time.

for a prank can you imagin Sephiroth taking Harry/Hadrian to seveth heven when cloud, tifa, vincent and everyone else is there to meet up or something like that and Harry/Hadrian just walks in goes up to vincent says loudly "Hi grandad" and just walks back out can you think of how much shock they would all be in and they all run out just to see seph flying away with Harry.

I loooovvvveeee it. Cant wait to see the next chapter if there is.

This. Story. Is. AWESOME! I really want Cloud to see Papa!Sephiroth!

have you abandoned this fic?

I hope you will continue writing this story. I really like it!

Hope ro read more soon.

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Whoot! Loving it so much! Thanks for writing, posting, and updating this. :D Just fantastic. :D I really look forward to what happens next. :D Will Sephiroth learn of the cupboard under the stairs? The having to cook and clean? The Harry Hunting? So much to think about! What kind of Dumbledore will this story have? Manipulative but well meaning? Completely evil? Somewhat senile? Thanks again and I really look forward to it. :)

The only real plot hole I found in this chapter is that Seph and Harry never talked about Harry's name change, so him suddenly being called 'Hadrian' or 'Mr. Valentine' would have caused confusion, not acceptance. You could add that as something they talk about before even going to the bank, or you could have it take place the first time Seph calls him Hadrian when he wakes up from the blood adoption potion. Technically, I think it should have happened before they went, just to be sure Harry even wanted a name change or liked the new name, but you could do it the other way.

:P The only serious error I found (other than some punctuation issues) was when you were trying to say they were 'raging war'...The terminology is like this: "People WAGE war while war rages around them." You used the second part right, but twice you used the first incorrectly. No real inconsistencies here-you explained how Gaia/Gaea could be on Earth but not be part of it and how the people of Gaia/Gaea react differently to the Lifestream than those outside it.

I think you mostly explained the difference as Gaia/Gaea being the world's 'holy land', but at some point in the story, it might be nice to find out why that specific spot, rather than the whole world, became a 'holy land' to the Lifestream, which cycles the whole world and can't technically discriminate.

Nothing really wrong with this chapter...though it would have been nice to know who Lily was a reincarnation of (or where she found the data about the Reflect spell).

I see fireworks and chaos erupting in Wizarding Britain when the news gets out. How will Ron and Hermione react? Will Dumbledore rethink his plans? Will Sirius remember his past life or will he need reminding And will Grandaddy Vincent come to visit? I have no idea, please update so we can find out! Looking forward to Chapter 4

Lol! Nice! Really nice!