Reviews for Back to the Good Ol' Days |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 great work love to see more |
DauntlessForever chapter 1 . 12/9/2014 The formatting is horrible so I couldn't read it. Break up your paragraph into smaller parts. |
spkieeb2 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014 Great story better than my first one just one tip. You need to paragraph it. Large chunky chapters turn away readers so yeah just read though it and paragraph it. Anyway look forward to more chapters |