Reviews for The Present
BS chapter 1 . 2/26
So cute and funny.
impatricialp chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Hahaha :) That's very Jane. Nice story! You did a great job writing Lisbon's character.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Not long enough but thanks for a very good read
MartyMc49 chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Hahaha. What a delightful story. Just like men! I'm sure Lisbon really loves Jane because she puts up with all his boyish antics. Thank you for writing this story.
An Anchorage, Alaska Reader,
Marty McGregor
FiascoWay chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Stumbled across this story by accident and so glad I did! I nice fun piece with poor Lisbon being 'outed' in the most amusing way.
Prolix5 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Excellent, I'm glad I found you got this one posted in English as well... I had a similar good time reading them in both language. I really love Jane's particular sense of humor and "no-way-I'm-gonna-be-discreet" attitidue _.
Thanks for sharing this.
Looking forward to reading more from you.
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Very cute! I really enjoyed it! Great story!
stxrdusty chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Jane is an asshole, and adorable little butt haha! It's not like Abbott didn't know, but really Jane!? Hahaha! This is cute, I liked it. :)
GoneMental42 chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
I love it- betrayed by a flushing toilet:D!
Wolfhound159 chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
I love it !