this story is so good! update please?!

Please update

So I went ahead and finished this..,, yeah I’m sorry but no. She would have found out Barry is the Flash in this scene. BECAUSE HE TAKES HIS MASK OFF! General dipshit does too! If you’re going to write this, please do it accurately. If not, place a huge ass AU WARNING to let everyone know that this is not how it’s actually gonna happen. Just... this needs some work. A lot of work...

Ya know... this story wassssss getting good but now... it’s not. It did a complete 180... I just can’t with her calling him “Red” and being to delusional to not put the pieces together. Idk why, but I seriously hate stories to where the person doesn’t know who the Hero is. It’s not hard to figure out and when it gets stretched and stretched that the OC is still being clueless and stupid.. it gets old. Plus chapter 27 and not once have you touched on her powers. She apparently “can make Barry do things.” Yet... nothing. And it’s chapter 27... it’s getting old and your bringing in new OCs that don’t seem to have a point or place in the story besides causing unnecessary drama and headaches... sorry but... it’s juts ran it’s couse in keeping the audience entertained

Soooooo, you changed it up I see.. the ending of how Black takes the Jewels and we Barry chases after he faints... okay then

You should definitely pick this back up! It's a great story and I absolutely love it! This is everything I could ask for in a Flash fanfic. Keep up the great work! I hope you decide to pick this back up soon.

Oh goodness, I noticed this story hasn't been updated in quite a while. Which is sad for me because over the past 33 chapters I've become fairly invested in the ending. I think this is one of the best flash fanfics that I've read in a while and I hope that you'll finish this story one day.

I've been reading this book for over a year now, maybe two I don't know, but I always hope you have the engergy time keep on writing. It's incredible! The plot and story have always been a favourite flash fanfic of mine, and I hope you can continue :)

Continue please

Good beginning

i am so invested in this it isnt even funny. please update soon

Please update soon

I love this story and need more of it! I need them to be together! I need her to tell them what happened and who she is!
Also on a side note lol I liked like the idea of the first kiss she has is with Red like something bad happens and he kisses her and then she feels bad cuz she loves them both and then when she finds out they are the same person she says something like what you so long to kiss me! Lol sorry just me being random can't wait to read what you do next :)

AHHH! You just have to updateI'm desperate to know what happens next!

Update, please.