Reviews for Characters watch their movie!
DreamCatcher34 chapter 19 . 1/31
This is a very old story - which I'm not saying is a bad thing! I'm just saying it's been over 5 years, and asking for an update or continuation may be pointless.

But that's fine! It's worth a try. So... could you please update?

I was really looking forward to the How To Train Your Dragon movie reaction particularly.

Now this story is great and all but there are a few issues that I feel should be pointed out. Don't get me wrong, you're a great author! Your story is great and better than some others I've seen. But no one is perfect so, in all honesty, you can't expect your work to be completely without flaw. A flaw is not necessarily a bad thing, though. Just something that you could improve on!

First of all, you don't include enough of the characters' reaction. Some characters, such as Elsa, pretty much all of the Guardians but specifically Jack Frost and Tooth, speak often. Hiccup and Anna are also mentioned often. Other characters, such as Astrid or Stoick, are hardly ever individually mentioned for commenting on the movie that they're watching or having unique reactions. Some, such as Fishlegs and Hans, don't talk at all. Maybe they've been mentioned for not laughing (Hans) when most of the people do, but besides that, they are practically ignored. And the twins are being oddly silent too.

Pretty much the entire HTTYD crew, minus Hiccup, are rarely mentioned or included in the story.

But maybe there's a particular reason you chose to do that and I'm just being annoying. Sorry. Also, the characterisation for some of these characters is a bit off, but, again, maybe I'm just nit-picking this too much.

Final, small issue: this story is hard to read sometimes. Such as: 'ELSA ANNA, PLEASE, YOU'LL ONLY MAKE IT WORSE!'. It's confusing especially because the name of the person talking is in all caps, but so are the lyrics they're singing. Maybe putting a colon after the character who's speaking's name could help distinguish from the dialogue and the words they're saying like: 'ELSA: ANNA, PLEASE, YOU'LL ONLY MAKE IT WORSE!'. Italics could be useful too, You could use those for sung parts rather than capital letters.

It's the small things...

Thanks for bothering to read this review!

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bmidd111 chapter 5 . 12/5/2019
why did you change some of Bunny's dialogue? like when he called Pitch a Shadow-sneaking rat-bag, you changed it to stinking rat bag for some reason.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2019
Is there any story that doesn't ship Elsa and Jack but still can have them both in it?
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2019
Oh my god, this is going to be hilarious!
Mukuro234 chapter 19 . 7/10/2019
Awesome!
DescendantsABC123Love chapter 19 . 6/14/2019
Please Update
RandomGirl313 chapter 19 . 6/5/2019
Plz plz update
Thanatos 2018 chapter 19 . 4/23/2019
Still waiting for update!
CrystalQueen187 chapter 19 . 3/15/2019
Nice chapter!
CrystalQueen187 chapter 10 . 3/15/2019
Great! Though about the part with Stoick. The confusion made sense. But the anger? He can't even really see them.

Also the disowning Hiccup, he did say something like that in the movie in the heat of the argument, right after that whole monstrous nightmare thing happened, but he regretted it almost instantly. Here he's had hours to get a hold of his emotions and think things over. He doesn't even really know exactly what's going on. So, it seemed very OOC.

Other than that, great work!
CrystalQueen187 chapter 7 . 3/15/2019
Great job! I've personally never actually seen anyone finish a watching the movie fic so congrats on that. My only criticism would be Jack is 17 or 18, so he's a teen, but I wouldn't call him aa child. Other than that, fantastic!
CrystalQueen187 chapter 5 . 3/15/2019
Lol. Great chapter. I loved it!
CrystalQueen187 chapter 4 . 3/15/2019
This is fantastic, but I'm a little confused. Did the ROTG characters already live through their movies like the Frozen ones did, or not?

Also, I'd think Elsa would have a little more to say about someone else with Ice Powers. Especially in the part about the 1968 blizzard. Which by the way, I really liked that part, although I was a little confused surprised no one from the other movies mentioned it.

You're doing great!
CrystalQueen187 chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
Love the point that the HTTYD characters are at when you have them watch the movie! Stoick, Gober and the other Vikings will be so shocked with the movie!
AliceCullen3 chapter 19 . 2/22/2019
LOVE IT!
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