I swear, every single time I read this, I read that restaurant's name 'FCK' as 'FUCK' and I never realized it until now... no idea why lol.

I recently started watching/reading JoJo's Bizarre Adventure and I can't help but think of DIO every time Jared mentions 'the world'.

I hate the OC 'cause he's op

yes

I've been holding back to say this but Jared is just OP, having him be immortal from the start is just mary sue. Just wanted to say that, but other than that the stories are great.

Julia? "the world"? Chin? Who are they?

Man giving just a quick review before quitting this series. First off my plan was to finish the first two stories so I could move on to the conquest thing that is coming out recently and I've been enjoying it till the second story started. I dont know why but it seems to me that the story is just getting more and more cringeworthy every chapter. Could be because im losing interest in the love section and favorize action,which is presented here as well but not that good (in my opinion).the story in itself isn't bad and I like the whole plot with Jared but at the same time I just started to get sick of him. Maybe his attitude or his way of speaking or his "staring". And even at the current state I'm at rn there wasn't any explanation about Jared's condition(which in my opinion should just be some demon or something like that)the chapter get dragged expecially in the second story and the sex scenes...well what can I say as I said I pretty much lost interest in that as well. I'm gonna move on but its kinda sad that I couldn't finish this story and move on to the conquest one but I can't just skip the rest of the second story and move on to the third one. Ma haert just cant do dat.

So all this time I thought Jared was pronounced "Jard" but now I think his name is pronounced "Jaired" and now I'm just confused.

Your story is truly great. You can write good stories like these. But one thing that make me cringe so hard when reading these are: Grammatical errors
No offense but you really need to learn grammars again. It would make these stories more enjoyable

Wait, some guest said that Jared fucked Nepgear. When did this happen?!

This truly was an amazing story. I'm glad to have read it. But I'm curious, are you going to continue into the Megadimension Arc?

1. I believe it's spelled Avery, not Every
2. Have you played Uncharted 4? The reason I bring this up is because Avery's treasure is mentioned in that game.

Best line ever: "Yo"

Amazing ending as expected of Jared I know he will do something about Plutie like seriously god what a amazing ending! Now question flys up to my head and learn tons thing about Jared and since I red the next on already I'm already excited for it and god damn I need update now GAHHH I NEEED this in my life XDD anyway awesome ending love it 100 times then before and will see me once again in Rom love story hehe XD

Bounced on my boys dick to this for hours. I haven't read this much since grade 5. Speaking of which, I may be stuck at a grade 5 reading level but even I can tell that this is written 100 times better than RWBY. I loved the part where Jared fucked Neptunes sister and then ended up marrying Neptune. It reminds of that time Jaune got cucked by literally everyone besides Phyrra but she ended up dying in the end just like Jared in that other plus plus plus.