Reviews for Heavenly Chocolate
M chapter 1 . 7/20
well... this was actually really good!
Eri chapter 1 . 2/28
Lol I always imagine this is how Michael Jackson was with Presley that he married. I think this is why I always fantasize about Gene Wilders willy (the character ya perv) because he was... More devious I think less innocent but appreciated innocence and looked for it if that makes sense but if I think about depps willy I get the Willies ( ahh I'll see myself out) because I feel like he is innocent to the point of being like... Mentally slow and I feel dirty like I'm somehow molesting him
The-one-who-is-chaos chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
I love it every time I read it
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Willy Wonka's Love Interest
Verity Simnel
. Verity is an extremely beautiful and blonde British university student who came here to work part time as an assistant and aspires to be a candy maker.
. Verity is very sweet and innocent, and loves to talk. She is around 15-20 years younger than Willy.
. However, Verity has a twisted side, loving to get into deep dark secrets. Verity has long golden blonde hair that tumbles down her back, large brown eyes, pale skin.
. Charlie looks up to her as a big sister, and even his new friend Veruca starts to like her too( and a little bit jealous because Charlie develops a small crush on Verity ).
. However, Charlie WOULD NEVER steal Willy's future bride as he knew all too well his scary side, and decided to focus on his new school life in Veruca's private school, called St. Francis' College.
theirs a hole in my heart chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
interesting...i like it but when i read amy i thought holy shit how did she survive i thought Mort killed you, and where is Ted. really thats what came to mind
Sebby's kitty chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
It was nice. But maybe you have to work the details?
meangirl8 chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
Great story
IWILLEATYOU chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
OMG THE INNOCENCE XS
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Y E S
RevolutionRoulette chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
This has made me curious about who Amy is, and whether it's worth writing a story that introduces her backstory and perhaps the development of her and Wonka's future :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
That my friend, was lovely! Willy is just so ahhhhh!3
FreshlyJuicedBeetles chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Pretty darn good! There needs to more shameless smut featuring Depp!Wonka. I'd devour anything else you write!