To be honest, I didn't read the first edition, so I don't know what the changes are that you made. But it's a really good story.

Please update its been more than a year.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

she spoke!

Very good story nice ending as well ;)

THIS WAS AMAZING! THE PERFECT ENDING FOR THIS STORY!

What a great story this turned out to be. I really enjoy reading it. You think you'll be able to update your other ones too, please? I love the way you write such creative stories.

Why not have lily call Arcee mama while she's kicking decepticon tailpipe and the cutest family reunion after the battle

DX NOOOoooo I hope she okay Please update soon and your other story's and wish you and your family a happy holidays and Merry Christmas

Uh-oh. I sure hope Lily's okay. Please update this AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

Ouuuuuuuh yeah! please continue!

I think that Amira has a cybertronian version of autism,fyi

Uh-oh. This doesn't look good. I sure hope the Autobots can find the Nemesis and stop Lily before she becomes a completely different bot. Please update this AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

Oh my Starscream better watch out. Love all Lilly stories though I have to admit she's a bit scary then cute. Oh well that's what happens when you push a girl past her breaking point. Ready or not here she comes.

Great Job and keep up the good work. Great Job and very well done ;) :)