Reviews for For the Crown |
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Guest chapter 15 . 7/12 It’s been a few years but you NEED to update this! Its a spiky incredible! |
Guest chapter 15 . 7/8 UPDATE DAM IT! this is the best thing ive ever read! PLLLLEEESSEEE update! |
AriIsDivergent chapter 1 . 6/25 OMG YES! |
Taytay123456 chapter 15 . 6/21 This was such an interesting concept and very well written. I hope you continue one day. |
Guest chapter 15 . 6/19 I have loved all your stories and when I’m feeling down or a little under the weather I always read some of your work and it brightens my day. I know that rl can get in the way of writing and it has been a while, but I absolutely adore stories like this where they are forced together and find love for each other so I really hope that you can complete this. Your writing is so detailed that I almost feel like I am there living it myself. I am wondering if it will come to light that perhaps Peeta noticed Katniss when he visited her district and has been wanting her ever since and he is only going through the reaping as it is tradition, but he alluded to finding her application at the very first look, perhaps because he was specifically looking for her. I hope that it comes out soon that Glimmer is sabotaging the other girls and it was her minion who planted the brooch in Cecilia’s room. I am just afraid to find out what she will have planned for Katniss. I am really hoping that it could be something like the Mulan story, where she is sent away, but comes to the rescue at he end. Maybe Katniss can rescue Peeta with her archery skills. Looking forward with anticipation to your next update no matter which story it is. |
engineerwenlock chapter 15 . 5/10 I've loved this story. Haha I'm glad I'm not the only one who read The Selection and thought it would work as a Hunger Games AU. And TBH I liked your Katniss a lot better than the protagonist of The Selection. She's compassionate and interesting and a bit softer than canon Katniss, which is understandable given her different circumstances. All in all well done. My one critique would be that it feels like Peeta and Katniss didn't get to know each other well before really jumping to this level of trust, but then, he's read her application, so I guess he knows her better than we've seen from just her pov. Anyway, I've enjoyed it. You took the best elements of The Selection and then made this story your own by making your writing style different and your protagonist more likable. Lovely job! |
thatgirl5683 chapter 15 . 2/9 I just wanna thank you for always writing such incredible stories. They’ve gotten me through so many tough times and as much as I’d love for you to finish them, I’m so happy with all that you’ve given. Thank you for these beautiful stories and for giving a break from the shitty parts of life every now and then. |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/1/2019 I so wish you would finish this 3 It's pretty darn amazing as it stands, and I would absolutely love to see what happens next. |
Aa chapter 1 . 8/19/2019 Please, keep writhing this fic! |
Guest chapter 15 . 6/26/2019 oml i lurve it |
lj.brennan chapter 15 . 6/22/2019 Love the story! Hope you'll continue it! |
WizMonCruWil chapter 11 . 5/24/2019 Yes! Peeta KISSES her HARD to get Katniss to stop adorably rambling! Perfect way to do it! And I love how she responded and relaxed into the kiss! |
statetech0 chapter 6 . 5/24/2019 One of the Reaped? That's a low way to refer to the prince's possible future bride! Come on, Thresh! |
triojediknights chapter 5 . 5/24/2019 It's nice that Annie will be one of Katniss's competitors! It looks like they will be friends, and I hope it remains so. And aww, Katniss is struck dumb by love at first sight when Peeta comes into view! |
CaliforniaTexasNorthCarolina chapter 4 . 5/24/2019 Uh, yeah the phrasing of the question regarding Katniss's virginity was so awkward! Ick, indeed! And yes, Katniss is chosen to be Peeta's bride! The departure almost has a Beauty and the Beast vibe to it! |