So sweet

Thank you. I occasionally come to this archive to look for Barney/Lily fics but I can hardly ever find them. This and two others are the only ones I can find. This was very well written. Are you majoring in English? You're very good.

I always think these are so fun, because they really are out there. I love how you made barney change for Lily. I also really like how you structured the story as well. I'd love to see you write more! You did such a great job with this short little fic!

I've always thought Lily Barney would be interesting. Good to see i'm not alone. Easily one of the best stories of this pairing out there. I hope you do another.

It is a good idea of the two of them

Finally a fanfic of my otp you should do more