Great story. Pity it's abandoned

Daphne's name is now Gr .. Daphne. It becomes a bit too much and get irritating

Love it so far, this story is fantastic to read and beautifully written with amazing character development

I really like the story hope you find the time to continue this story. I like the character progression and how they interact. Again hope to see more best of luck

This is excellent! Very good work.. what make you stop?

good story, but you use the word softly way too much.

awesome

This ff was good so far if only u continued it

Great. Wish there was more of it and a more in-depth explanation of the contract and how harry found out

Your story is progressing very nicely. You've got a very nice detail verses story line balance and the character development is coming along well. I like how Harry and Daphne are coming together and how you are growing Harry and developing Daphne. I also like the bit about the Dementor's kiss. Getting rid of Tom's soul splinter has affected Harry in many positive ways. I really hope you will continue this. It's a very interesting and enjoyable story.

You are off to a nice start. I would ask for a little bit more detail about how Harry and Daphne end up together. It feels kind of rushed and you have a really good plot going on. It would help the story to add more to it. I like how you have brought Daphne to life. I think it would benefit her character development if you added more to the story. The interplay between her and Harry is getting off to a good start. I really like this and I hope you consider continuing it. I would like to see what happens between them.

I decided to reread this today and it remains my favorite fanfiction in the Harry Potter section. This fic was the first time that I had ever heard of Daphne Greengrass and now I can't get enough of her. I just wanted to thank you for introducing me to this subsection of Harry Potter fanfiction. Hopefully you'll return to writing soon.

This is great...hope his is still a stag...i hope that be helps Sirius and Peter doesn't escape...l wonder how be is going to deal with his friends...will he out grow them...hole he become friends with Neville...je would make a great friend...i like him

Wish there was more

Your story is absolutely amazing! Thank you for giving Harry a true friend and sole mate in Daphne! I'm glad that she doesn't make unreasonable demands on him and expect him to tell her everything. Hermione, while a very intelligent girl, isn't a good friend. She expects everyone to tell her everything and to obey her commands like she is their mother. Has she taken lessons from Molly? ;-) Fabulous story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!