Reviews for Ascension to Greatness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Pity it's abandoned |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daphne's name is now Gr .. Daphne. It becomes a bit too much and get irritating |
![]() ![]() Love it so far, this story is fantastic to read and beautifully written with amazing character development |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the story hope you find the time to continue this story. I like the character progression and how they interact. Again hope to see more best of luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is excellent! Very good work.. what make you stop? |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, but you use the word softly way too much. |
![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This ff was good so far if only u continued it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great. Wish there was more of it and a more in-depth explanation of the contract and how harry found out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is progressing very nicely. You've got a very nice detail verses story line balance and the character development is coming along well. I like how Harry and Daphne are coming together and how you are growing Harry and developing Daphne. I also like the bit about the Dementor's kiss. Getting rid of Tom's soul splinter has affected Harry in many positive ways. I really hope you will continue this. It's a very interesting and enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are off to a nice start. I would ask for a little bit more detail about how Harry and Daphne end up together. It feels kind of rushed and you have a really good plot going on. It would help the story to add more to it. I like how you have brought Daphne to life. I think it would benefit her character development if you added more to the story. The interplay between her and Harry is getting off to a good start. I really like this and I hope you consider continuing it. I would like to see what happens between them. |
![]() ![]() I decided to reread this today and it remains my favorite fanfiction in the Harry Potter section. This fic was the first time that I had ever heard of Daphne Greengrass and now I can't get enough of her. I just wanted to thank you for introducing me to this subsection of Harry Potter fanfiction. Hopefully you'll return to writing soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great...hope his is still a stag...i hope that be helps Sirius and Peter doesn't escape...l wonder how be is going to deal with his friends...will he out grow them...hole he become friends with Neville...je would make a great friend...i like him |
![]() ![]() Wish there was more |
![]() ![]() Your story is absolutely amazing! Thank you for giving Harry a true friend and sole mate in Daphne! I'm glad that she doesn't make unreasonable demands on him and expect him to tell her everything. Hermione, while a very intelligent girl, isn't a good friend. She expects everyone to tell her everything and to obey her commands like she is their mother. Has she taken lessons from Molly? ;-) Fabulous story! Can't wait to see what will happen next! |