Reviews for What's Done In the Dark
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 6/25
"Unlike Ron I have never told you how I felt. I don't like how you invade my privacy. I don't like how you snatch things from my hands. I don't like to be poked. I don't like to demanded of anything. And I bloody hate when people make decisions about my life without my say or consent.'"

It is true. Every time a writer has Hermione punch, slap, poke, or head-slap Harry, I wish Harry would do the same to her. Hermione is frequently physically abusive toward Harry. If he did any of those things to her - even with less force than she uses - she would whine and demand he be suspended or given extreme detention.

She truly does snatch things from his hands and get in his face, demanding information that is none of her business. I hate her lack of respect for Harry. Thank you for nailing her.
retnuh1000 chapter 1 . 7/27/2019
I realize that I’m a bit late to give an opinion on this, but I would love to see a larger story made out of this. A more hopeful story about Hermione finder her way, and trying to improve herself in a world where Harry and Ron have moved on without her. That sounds like a really interesting story to me.
delia cerrano chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
I think it has possibilities. I hope you can find a life mate for her and 'finish" this story but giving it a happy ending for her also. Really enjoyed the "telling off" you had Daphne give Hermione. Every bit was true as she appears in most of the stories and how I always think of her.
GryffindorTom chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
Hmm I like it
KrisB-71854 chapter 1 . 2/17/2016
Poor Hermione. looks like she won't grow up and remain friends with them in time.

This is one of those times when she needs her parents and for them to have an honest adult conversation about trust and friendships and why you shouldn't expect friends if you give them up for your own reasons or benefit.
Saissa chapter 1 . 1/16/2016
Finally someone tells Hermione just how much of a horrible (b)itch she really is!

This seems to have some slight connection to your WIP story - Ascension to Greatness.
DylanL chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
this sounds like a very interesting story and i would love to see it expanded, especially what harry was talking about
Little Viking Big Eyes chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Had to read this again... I absolutely adore this. I would love nothing more than for it to become a full story. I do dearly hope you continue.
LoveNogg chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
I don't really like Hermione s I'm glad I found a story that focus on how she really is. Don't get me wrong I like reading about independent and smart that don't allow their friends or family distract them but for some reason I just can't stand her. If I ever met a person like her who bosses me around and thinks she better than me because she can read a book is really annoying. If Harry was never friends with her or Ron he would have been able to be independent and smart (when he was in school with the whale child he got better grades). I can see Harry studying instead of allowing Ron to drag him down and Hermione being all self-righteous about being able to study. I hated those characters because of this (and the fact that they betrayed Harry's trust)
envirosue chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
Definitely not for all those who see Hermione as perfect. Gah! I love this.
Hermeigna chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
Like were you go whith this plot, hope to see a continuation.
Goose chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
He crucifies Hermione for trying to do right by him, but is still good friends with Ron after the stuff he's pulled? This story is so damn OOC its ridiculous. Also, this is plain Hermione bashing. Let me guess, Snape will be one of their children's godfather? Terrible story.
ElsaElphieGinny chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
I like this :)
26Naruto26 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
Click favorite! I love it!
Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Great writing hon! I loved this! ;o)
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