Reviews for Savior's End
Tracey Young chapter 1 . 4/15
Dumbledore, Snape, and both Malfoys are the worst. Sadly, Harry is the one to suffer.
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 3/8
I agree totally.

Tom is bad but a least he kills you fairly quickly.

Albus used the Dursleys to torture Harry for over a decade!

Snape is anything but good or a hero.

Alan Rickman has my hate for making so many think Snivelus is good.

Jo Rowling needs to be reborn in Harry's place.
Let her live in a cupboard.
InAnnaCat chapter 1 . 1/23
I used to like dumbledore in the first books. By prisoner of azkaban my opinion of him was waning by the last book I thought that dumbles was a monster. I have never seen a story where dumbles is torn to pieces by the publict. I like it. Would you consider a story where he gets a dementors kiss and then his body is torn to pieces and then the pieces are thrown through the veil of death!
Kai chapter 1 . 1/5
Huh? Are there people out there who would insist that Dumbles isn't a dark wizard? One must only look at the memories that Snape donates to Harry while dying. Dumbledore says, though not explicit, but it's there:

Harry MUST die. Exactly at the time I have planned. He might survive the Killing Curse, but he can't know that. He must not have a single reason to hesitate throwing away his life. Everything of his has to be taken away. He mustn't be allowed to have anything that would make his life worthwhile.

Even Ronald is primed to show his true colours during the Camping Trip of Doom. And Dumbledore KNEW exactly that Ronald would run out on Harry. After all, he leaves Ronald an artefact that allows him to track down Harry again after deserting him. He does NOT leave it to him to play with lights.

And minutes before Harry leaves to let Riddle kill him Ronald even takes Hermione away. That kiss in front of Harry was the last straw. With that Harry had lost everything.

And when Harry used the alleged Resurrection Stone his parents and his godfather cheer for him because he's about to walk to his death at 17. A stone that was in Dumbledore's hands for quite some time. And Harry's piss-poor Hogwarts standard education with the electives for the stupid and the lazy, choosing ably assisted by Ronald, doesn't allow him to examine that ring. Hmmm... Suspicious much?
gginsc chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Poor Harry!
InAnnaCat chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
Great story! I am sorry that Harry died of abuse but I was glad that dursleys and dumbledore and DE's and Voldy got what they deserved! Now I want you to make a story where Harry blames Dumbles for placing him at the dursleys and for not checking on him and considers him a monster. Harry swears on his life and magic that the dursleys starved him and beat him and made him a slave and that Dumbledore placed him there and never checked on him allowing it and that that Harry wants justice for dumbledore to get all the suffering and starvation and beatings that Harry suffered and Harry says that Dumbledore is hopeless,irredeemable and damned and that the wizarding world will always think so and he will always be called monster so mote it be! ?That would be great if you could do it.
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
I agree with you. In Sinyk's "Angry Harry and the Seven," when Dumbledore starts in with his Greater Good nonsense, Harry throws the following quotes right in his face:

"Of all tyrannies, a tyranny sincerely exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It would be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron’s cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end for they do so with the approval of their own conscience." - C.S. Lewis

"This, and no other, is the root from which a tyrant springs; when he first appears he is a protector." - Platoq

Both describe Dumbledore right down to the ground, IMHO.

As for Snape loving Lily, I simply can't buy it. There is a difference between love and obsession. (I wouldn't be surprised to see a shrine to her in Snape's bedroom.) Snape has used the years since Lily's death to build this tragic love story in his mind. Lily obviously can't contradict him, can she? His treatment of the child Lily loved more than her own life is NOT the behavior of a man who adored her.

As for that horrid name ... I'm sure Ginny put a compulsion on Harry to name poor Albus Severus. Either that or it's leftover from those weird compulsions Dumbledore used on him over the years. I can't think of another reason. JM2K ... all of it.
redgreeneyes chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I dislike Dumbledore for the whole Dursley thing, I hate Snape and I abhor Draco. The little ferret is my most hated character of the entire series with his filthy family, Umbitch and the Dursleys following close behind him.

Poor Harry. If Harry Potter wasn't a children's book, Harry would have been long dead by the time his Hogwarts letter had arrived.
rowenasheir chapter 1 . 6/3/2017
I agree totally on your version of AD as I can't believe that he thinks all muggles are family loving, benign humans, especially after the rape etc. of his sister and his father's incarceration after getting due justice.

Sending TMR, SS and HP to live in abusive households can only be the actions of a stupid , uncaring man that should never be allowed near children or a manipulative totalitarian with his own agenda.

A good punishment would be restricting his magic, deaging him, put him under a semi-permanent glamour and and make him live with the Dursleys (for the same length of time he sentence the 3 boys to living in hell!)
daisycb chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
I absolutely agree with you about Dumbledore and Malfoy ( an obnoxious little shit if there ever was one), but I must admit that while indifferent to the book Snape, I did warm up to Alan Rickman's movie Snape. Regardless, either way he was a real arse.
twistyguru chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
Great story, albeit very sad for little Harry. I COMPLETELY agree with your low opinion of Dumbles, Snape and Draco, for many of the same reasons. No 'Greater Good' justifies Dumble's actions; I tend to believe he's an evil manipulator playing at the semi-senile grandfather role. He's also got a bad case of believing his own press releases-NEVER a good thing. Snape and Draco are just scum. Period. Full stop. Voldie at his worst probably didn't come close to Dumble's lifetime achievement of misery and evil-which, oddly enough, includes Tom becoming a dork lord, too.
senawario chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
very nice. And by the way I totally agree about Dumbledore; he's the real villain of the HP series as far as I am concerned
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
You didn't mention Sirius Black. In the middle of Dumbledore's bean spilling, did he reveal any ulterior motives to deny Sirius a trial?
The Frau chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
Couldn't agree more. No man who could keep sending an innocent child back into an abusive home should be considered, 'The Leader of the Light'. Actions speak louder than words!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
indeed, Bumbles is a twisted fuck
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