This is so bloody cool!

Great story. Poor Killian struggling with Emma and her demands - yet always the gentleman. I actually read the first few chapters again after I read he had all his memories and no one else did. It made it so much better reading those scenes when knowing that. Loved the "poofing". And great mention of "they never get the nose right" - such a perfect Eugene/Killian thing and let's face it Emma and Killian's story is so "Tangled".

Loved this story! From Emma the wild captain to sharing I love you in bed, Emma & Killian shared a great journey here. Good job!

Holy shit, I almost had a heart attack reading this scene. Emma, omg. Wow.

I enjoyed this story. It was fun, fast moving, full of the characters we love in the way we know and love them. Thanks so much for writing.

Brilliant Henry. He was wonderful, cool headed, smart, determined.

Rumple is fascinating. I noticed his reference to Killian as a 'filthy pirate'. Somethings don't change! Snow is impressive with her use of simple magic to save the baby and now the rest of them.

I was worried about Neal. David pretending to be the Dark One was very good., I don't think it would be easy for him, but the motivation of son and normal life was urgent.

Finally Snow is back. Her schoolteacher behavior is adorable. Emma and Killian are true love. I'm certain!

Baby Neal! This George is as evil as the Dark One. Is Regina herself or still confused?

I am worried about Henry but happy for Emma and Killian. Finally!

I laughed out loud at Rumple or Rufus. So clever. Thank goodness Emma is back! Because Regina is a bandit and riffraff. Holy cow so fun!

Emma is hysterical. Killian has got to be struggling with her demands.

Charming as the Dark One is pretty creepy.

Gold talking to George about compasses was funny and very clever. But Storybrooke at the top of the beanstalk? Emma wants to be all over a very virtuous Killian. Robin is pretty and Will in a tight red tank top! Have I been drinking? Reading on...