There are some errors i forgot to mention but anyway you girl left me hanging there. They finally kissed why would you leave it there? They are starting to develop their feelings you know TT

Girl i swear this is better than other 1k, 2k, 3k favorited zutara fanfics out there. I could often find something to be bothered about like quotation marks, grammatical errors, characterization and whatnot. But so far I haven't found any of those here. Even the phasing of the story is good; only focusing on the important parts instead of elaborating unnecessary stuff. The only problem I could find is that it's incomplete (why?and it lacks the expression of feelings. Especially when Katara was being raped. You were able to make us readers vizualize the scenario but I was wondering what Katara was feeling physically and emotionally. Aside from that, I truly enjoyed this.

Poor katara stolen and broken by the fire men and women and they stripped her naked if they whant they could pout katara the way she Is naked as the day she was born katara get to change her name to birthdaysuit girl because she naked katara the naked slave girl of the fire nations for her life naked in one through six and if she get her life much much much worst for her Fire lord ozi would have his men and women to shave all her long brown hair to bold ness for it too

This story is getting good. Keep up the good work man!

Please update!

plz continue. its really good.

Up date please & thank-you

very good

Very ba news for Katara. I mean, she's gonna be trapped on a house with both Azula and Mai? Oh an this is going to get interesting.
So they finally kissed. Can't wait to see the conversation that will surely follow.

Tearbending...

Wow. This just keeps getting better and better. I love how Katara's stockholm syndrome is coming into place. Your also doing a good job justifing Zuko's change of heart for this versión.
I feel like we're mising a Iroh in all this. I get it that he's at prisión, but if Zuko already decided that he hates his father and want to set things right, shouldn't he pay is uncle a visit to tell him about it?
Also I'm still waiting to see Mai's reaction regarding Zuko's "Konkubine".

I really hope Karata doesn't get pregnant. I mean, that would be a whole new level of evil if you do that.
I wonder how Mai is taking the fact that Zuka now has his own personal girl in his father's harem. But I wonder even more how come other men from around the castle have free access to the Fire Lord's personal harem.

I knew it! I knew there where rape Avatar stories! They said I was mad! Muahahaha!
Damm poor Katara. Azula's involment in the rape didn't cuase much of a impresion on me. I do find surprising the lack of the word Blood durging the whole thing.
Well se where this lead us.

I really am not certain about this story but it could be great so I will keep my eye on it. Thank you for sharing your story.

cool story man