dude I like your story not sure about ryu but it's good everywhere else

Excuse me but where did all these feels come from?! Knowing the truth should have allowed me to finish chapter one laughing at the uninformed, but noooo~

Great, it looks like you’ve made this mistake as well... the description made it seem like the only forced changes to canon would be Naruto running into Itachi and Itachi deciding to train him, and the story would be about how the world reacts to those changes. Giving Naruto the sharingan, while not to my liking, is also acceptable since that seems to be an important divergence from canon. The random, seemingly powerful OC you’ve planted in Oto however, is not acceptable. I want to see how the canonical world reacts to Itachi’s choice and Naruto’s changes, not this OC who means nothing to me. In the end it’s your story and your choice what to do, but to me personally that ruins things and I’m not interested anymore.

While it’s original to make him an Uchiha through Kushina rather than Minato, I dislike it since him not being an Uzumaki just feels wrong. Also, emphasis on ‘an’... it’s not a Uchiha; it’s AN Uchiha.

Can’t wait for the next chapter man and hopefully things get a bit easier for you

hope you're doing well man take your time updating but glad to see you back

please update, it's brilliant

Pfff kyuubi broke the 4th wall xD

Your story is EXTRA bullshit. Go and die somewhere please or take this down cuz you are just making more stupid people even more stupid by thinking you story is actually good. please leave.

Gay

Making Kushina an Uchiha? That just doesn't seem right. That would change her entire physical appearance and Kushina without red hair is unimaginable. Making Minato an Uchiha is much more believable because he isn't part of a clan.

Haven't finished the chapter yet, but I must say; these fight scenes are terrible. A kyuubified Naruto gets knocked out by a cut beneath his eye? Ridiculous

WHoa, Whoa...lets not get hasty...right?
I hope this does not go too dark

I'm done. I don't like this at all. Kakashi nearly kills Naruto multiple times during the spar. That's abuse. The way you wrote it sounded to me like he enjoyed it. I was weary when you decided to make his mother an Uchiha and give home their eyes. I hate stories like that but I continued reading because I liked everything else about it. Now I feel sick reading this detailed fight. This is definitely NOT the Naruto I know and love and the characters aren't likeable either. Especially my favorite character who's Kakashi.

I don't believe Kakashi wouldn't be able to sense the guy who was hiding during his and Naruto's spar.