Reviews for Across the Universe Book 1: Pieces of Destiny
Guest chapter 4 . 5/8
I know this is old, but the English alphabet was considered high galactic standard.:) wiki/High_Galactic_alphabet
snowcloud8 chapter 8 . 2/6
I like the story so far. Some of the things you have in your story are a bit cliched and unoriginal, and the singing along with songs is kinda of unnecessary and aren't really a great way of explaining who your character is, but I like that you paid attention to the fact that they probably wouldn't understand English (though I have yet to see that issue explained yet) and I do enjoy that you give Anakin and your protagonist some organic interactions rather than having them fall in love with each other.

Also fair warning: Padme has taken a massive backseat in all of this to the point where I don't think she's spoken in the last two chapters, so be aware of that. It's OK if you didn't. It's hard to write multiple people in a scene. Future writing tip is to highlight certain characters different colors and then go over the list and see if one of your characters hasn't talked in awhile.
Arkytior's Song chapter 18 . 2/6/2019
First off I'm screaming at the Phantom of the Opera chapter I freaking LOVED IT! One of my absolute favorite movies and soundtracks ever and I just ugh. Again I ended up crying but this time while surprised why, not surprised it happened lmao.
BUT OMG THE ENDING LIKE WHAT?! AAAAAA cant wait to start the next one!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/19/2019
Wait where did padme go? Did i forget?
Natman717 chapter 19 . 1/10/2019
Amazing! Thanks for this story.
Bipolar chapter 4 . 11/25/2018
Am I the only one that finds it fucking weird that in one chapter she's talking about helping them change their fate and NOT letting them watch the movies? Like, are you a fucking idiot, girl?
Guest chapter 18 . 4/24/2018
"you can't fix stupid" lmaoooo

anyway, this was pretty enjoyable! I like Aria as a character, even though she ticks off a lot of "Mary-Sue"-esque tropes. :)
Isabel3710 chapter 11 . 4/15/2018
How dare you! *pulled out lightsaber*
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 18 . 3/16/2018
Summary is interested but I don’t want wasted time to read this story. I am obidala fan and I only read story they end up together. I don’t like author who make them or their friend end up with obi wan.
DullReign82 chapter 6 . 2/15/2018
this is such a good story and I will continue to read more.
DullReign82 chapter 1 . 2/15/2018
Anakin it's no wonder you turned to the dark side. lol A solid beginning.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/16/2017
Aria is about as likeable as Jar-Jar Binks
Christineoftheopera chapter 15 . 1/6/2017
The 2004 movie version... oh dear.

That was based off the better stage production the one which would have been performed on stage.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/19/2016
Tears. So many
micky-likes-stuff chapter 8 . 12/3/2016
Wow.! awesome. I totally love the story question though do you intend to make Captain Alaric be like Captian Rex? cause imagining it does seems so... hehehehe
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