Reviews for The Serpent & the Lion
Emberhee chapter 13 . 8/3
Really good! I like both frozen and Harry Potter. What will Umbridge do to them? I like the bogart and the detention the best. :)
Werewolf McWerewolf II chapter 13 . 8/2
Just finished re-reading the entire fic and that last chapter was definitely worth the wait! Really looking forward to the next chapter!
smol bean chapter 13 . 7/28
Oh my god i cant believe i miss the update but BLESS YOU. This is so soft, the secret is finally out. Anna got her memory and her sister back. It's love will thaw again! She thaws Elsa heart by jumping in front of that arrow. The image of Elsa having an ice gauntlet tho, that is so, so attractive. Looking forward to Elsa finally controls her power and let Anna takes care of her wound from that freaking toad.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/20
There it is! ANNA'S LOVE! Can she control her magic now? Can she? Can she? Can she?
And oh, is anna's arm still on a sling? Cause that would be so cool. So cool
Michael-GoldenHeart23 chapter 1 . 7/20
I don’t think you could’ve started this story any better. What a way to introduce Elsa! The boggart set the tone so well and I’m eager to see what’s next. You did a great job portraying Elsa’s anxieties and then showing us something beyond what she feared. The fact that she saw herself instead of Anna leaves so many questions. Brilliant!
Mickey chapter 13 . 7/20
Can't wait for the upcoming chapters especially now that the sisters are together
Mickey chapter 13 . 7/20
No, nooo, you don't understand how invested i am in your story! I've read this in a span of two days and I. Am. Addicted! I love it! Every sentence in it. Every word. Every letter. This is perfect. I am not a fan of harry potter but you're turning me into one. I love the relationship of the sisters. I love that this focuses on them in the harry potter setting. I love your story. I love your writing. I love everything in this. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Really hope to see you update as soon as you can. You are awesome!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/13
Please don't take too long with the next chapter! I really want to know what happens next!
Taiomeno chapter 13 . 7/12
OH GOD. I WAS SO HAPPY WHEN I SAW YOU UPDATED THE FIC! Seriously, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Your writing is really high quality, and I specially adore the way you describe each character's emotions! My favorite chapter so far was the 12th. I could feel my own chest thightening when Elsa had her panic attack in the field. This chapter was also delightful! Seeing the sisters finally getting along again feels so rewarding. I am extremely curious to see what happens next!
GinsengH chapter 13 . 7/11
Glad to see this one hasn't been abandoned.

I think that it was the right choice to not follow the Frozen sequence of events to the letter (ie: Elsa's powers are discovered Anna chases after her Anna gets hit by a bolt of ice accidentally that only a case of true love can cure). While that made for a fun story in the original Frozen, it would have made a Harry Potter crossover kind of pointless if had just copied those events over.

I am both curious and concerned about this "elemental" plot line. My concern comes from how it is dangerously close to Frozen 2's elemental spirits theme. That particular theme took Elsa's unnatural gifts, and made her into something almost divine. It essentially removed the relative realism from the universe she resided in and made the world something all together supernatural. In the Harry Potter sense, the world is already supernatural, but it still retains a degree of being almost mundane. People can levitate objects with a stick, but they are all otherwise still regular people all bound by the same rules (ie: magic) as everyone else. So, here my concern is that Elsa not only has this unnatural ice themed wandless magic, but that her existence itself might even be on another level. Similar to the first point above, it almost defeats the purpose of inserting these characters into the HP universe if all of their original themes end up crossing over as well.

However, since the first 13 chapters have been so good, I will remain hopeful that you have a solid plan for addressing this "elemental" status.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/11
Just started this this morning, just finished it, and I am hooked! Can't for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/11
Welcome back! Thank you for the update and not abandoning this! Love Frozen h!p verse
Macdutton chapter 13 . 7/11
Honestly this might be the most excited I've been to see a fabric update in a while. Well written, nice and suspenseful, with great emotional payoff. 11/10 might be rereading the whole story
Agirlcalleddani chapter 13 . 7/11
Looooooved this. Even bring the centuars in made the book make a bit more sense. Especially when Harry and them are in the forest and the centuars are as aggressive as they were. Super excited to read the next chapter. Hope it comes out soon
Littlefoxylove chapter 13 . 7/10
This is definitely my favorite Harry Potter/Frozen story. I love that Elsa is in Slytherin and not Gryffindor or Ravenclaw. (:
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