I still think this story is great and I hope you update it soon

I’ve enjoyed this thus far. Keep writing. I literally almost shit my pants when Trunks “wish” was granted! That was one hell of a story plot twist! Go get at it!

Why does he fly? Makes zero sense lol massive plot hole but okay

Dude you need to really finish your stories

the only ones who could match gohan at ssj or higher are the heavy hitters, the rest could take on the yamcha and the like, piccolo and the sayains would wreck the lower potem tole of marvel sorry but thats how i see it lol

Where is 11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20. Huh, where

when will there be updates I want more!

this novel is terrible. because right from the start you've got an mc that will never be met with adversity in which the main character can grow as person from. also all the other characters just feel like wallpaper in the story and only reason their there is to just marvel at how strong the MC is. the only good thing about this is the author has an interesting crossover idea.

this is awosme

It needs a lot of work, but it's still a very well thought out story.

You should add Thanos into the story frame that can make an interesting story or Magneto taking Trunks causing Gohan to join the X-men to get Trunks back in any way possible plus great chapter

I hope that bulma dosent die

What about Goten

awesome story you have here I love it and could bulma's newest invention be some kind of phone they could call her from it no matter where they were even in another universe

holy hell that was long but time well spent