Naruto believes there is good in everyone but the only one he gives a chance in the church is Raynare. How typical...

Freed is weak, when he fought Kiba he had the Excaliburs... Also, why isn't Naruto more pissed off with the fact that Rias keeps calling him her servant? He ain't.

Pedophile.

Not to be mean but why did you make naruto a little biotch kinda defeats the purpose of the story.

Fuck it! Lost interest because you made him lose chakra. Suck it, worst thing can happen in a naruto story

What makes you think That Naruto is a Human?! He might be a specimen of the humanoid beings, but he is not a Human. Perhaps they call themselves Humans on his planet but doesn't mean he is one.

First of All, Naruto uses Chakra and something would have already returned back to him and not being defeated by a mere Fallen Angel.

Superman or Clark Kent looks like a Human and falls under the same category of Human species yet he is not. Same can be said about Naruto, it irks me that people immediately place Naruto under the weak category of those Biblical factions of DxD.

Naruto will be more 80% Chakra and 20% a Human being!

For a story you claimed wasn't dead, it looks pretty dead to me.

Why drop the story just when it's about to get interesting? You had so much to look forward to. Naruto kicking ass. Naruto wooing Rias. Or I suppose, Rias wooing Naruto given how dense he seems in this story because anime boy.

This story, like many others, has potential to be at least somewhat entertaining, yet so many of you drop the story 4-6 chapters in. It's crazy how many stories I've started reading, thought "this really isn't half bad", then realized it was only five chapters long. And the last update was in 2015 or 2016.

The only complaints I really have is how abrasive people are towards Naruto, given the fact that he's not actually part of a peerage. His actions really aren't anyone's business at this point, beyond the general worry a kind-of friend might have. That, and you were mostly sticking to canon fairly closely until the end of Asia's little intro arc.

I also would really prefer it if Madara happened to be dropped in another universe entirely because the whole "this is a crossover story where the hero ends up in a new world... BUT SO DOES HIS ARCH NEMESIS!" thing has never once been interesting to read. It's just lazy and aggravating. I want to read about the hero facing new struggles, not the same dude in a different setting.

It's a shame because I've been on a big DxD kick recently. Mostly because I'm looking for stories where Rias isn't a totally selfish bitch before falling in love with hero. She's quite adorable when she isn't a narcissist. I've found a few, but as previously mentioned, they are seemingly all abandoned. Bonus points for Akeno and Koneko joining in, but I guess that just makes me a bit of a pervert. Or just greedy.

Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update comes.

Awesome so update?

Update please

Update

Interesting please update

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Hey, I was wondering if you could add Kalawarner to the harem. She seems to be the type to follow the locally strongest power (ehich explains why she defected with Raynare). Above that, it might make it easier for Raynare to feel more at home with Naruto if she isn't alone against the devil women

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