just confused of Harry's animagus form, how many forms does he even have, does that mean hid patronus charm also changes, also bit confused about the time line as the staring of the chapter he is 16 then he becomes 14 and then to 15.

It was a great fic, i really loved the beginning but unfortunately im not comfortable with how you ended the two, even though they were OCs. i really dont know if this is a harem fic or not but even though i despise harem, you couldve made it work in this since Harry is the heir/lord of 5 houses, so he could possibly take 5 wives or smthn. I know character death is important for a good fic but the way you killed Carol and Jez was like as though you couldnt wait to get rid of the two. Please dont take this comment as a flame but if you did give up writing due to the flame comments, it is pretty unfortunate but i do hope you continue this fic for those who dont mind the character deaths but im going to have to stop with chap 27. I really did enjoy the fic upto 27 though.

Incredibly well written, absolute sleep destroyer.

Particularly loved the house of lucifer as well, that was awesome.
Are you considering posting a sequel?

Engl1sh Drag0n

Excellent story, although wouldn’t the greengrass family have gotten Harry to embrace his feelings, especially after his two friends deaths.

Well, the first thing I have to say is, you can bet that either Fumblemort or somebody else'll enter Thomas's name into the Goblet of Fire and the second is that the girls'll've likely talked Harry into entering himself. But regardless of who enters Thomas, he'll be allowed to compete even though he's underage and lacks the knowledge to survive the tournament. It also wouldn't surprise me if Fumblemort and the other supposed Judges try to prevent Harry from competing even though his name came out of the Goblet. I am surprised that James Potter hasn't as yet disinherited his eldest son and thrown him from the family. That way he could make Thomas his heir. It's also quite obvious that the Potters worship in the temple of Fumblemort and don't think for themselves.

Not such a good idea getting Fumblemorts' attention. If he's so stupid as to bring that moronic stone into a school full of children then getting his attention isn't such a good thing. Nothing good can come from it. As personally, I see him as the Primary Dark Lord of the Late Twentieth to early Twenty-first Centuries. It's a damn good thing he chose the wrong Potter as the Boy-Who-Lived. This way Harry got to grow and reach his true magical potential. Had ol' Fumblemort gotten his greedy claws into him at such an early age he'd be absolutely pathetic as a wizard now.

It was enjoyable... Until you made Harry go unhinged

Poorly written, just another takes of matching writer's idea into canon, poorly done so. Just glance at several passages of a chapter and you can click "next" since the rest are pointless, doesn't add anything meaningful to the story.

just a little mistake u write Maxine its actualle maxime im pretty sure. sry if im wrong, good story btw

You fucking bastard ...aasshole. . U killed them u idiot

This story really needs a comeback.

2 much happened in these last two chapters I feel. Also kind of upset that you killed the 2 girls because you couldn't find a way to fit them in. 2 of the most pointless characters I have ever seen in a Fic honestly.

It had its problems but it was far from the worst Fic out there.

The basilisk got knocked off balance by 48,665.757888 Newtons of force. A bullet impact hits at around 304 Newtons of force just for comparison.

Whoa! So what happens next?

Daphne is a bish, she needs to be taken out.