Are there any other chapters on this story? I'm curious as a kid hearing what games are, besides, I hope this is not the end of this story...

Thank you very much.! I'm so glad the first review of my first ever story was so positive! And I just realized that in my account anonymus reviews where turned off. Oops...anyway its turned on now. So if anyone else would R&R I'd really appreciate it. I already feel like continueing. And after monday I have two days off. Maybe time to start a serial fic. Borderlands or Skyrim. I may turn on my PM as well for suggestions. I know I'm not popular, but I love to learn if peoplewith more XP :) read my fics

You have a good introduction. I can tell youre just starting but there is nothing but improvement from here. It was a noce change of saving Angel, Im curious if you make a whole new OC vault hunter team. There is so much you can do. I like it and hope you write more. Have a great day.