Jasper ate animals along the way?

Aro might keep her head until she is truly insane, or more insane that she already is.

I almost stopped reading when Demetri got killed.

Jasper is supposed to be older than Edward and Alice in human and vampire years... How did Alice find him as a young boy?

Although at this point it was quite obvious that Seth and Jake were going to imprint on the twins at this point in the story, I'm glad seth actually got an imprint.

I am roflol at Charlie sceaming like a girl every time Irina throws him on her back. This is a very interesting plot and I love it. I do have a question though. Is it only because Isabella is a hybrid that she has fangs? I haven't read that the other vamps have fangs.

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I loved some of your stories especially paul and bella but this story I couldn't not finish. It just overwhelming. Its too many characters at once and too much going on. But your writing and weaving if stories is great keep up the good work but this story just didnt scratch my itch

It took me a number of days to read through this, and while I noticed a few grammatical errors they were easily over looked as I immersed myself in this wonderfully written story. I will definitely be checking out your other works.

I loved it. Wish there had been more. :3

Ummm first of all, when bella healed rosalie’s soul you said Eleazer looked at her in awe, but then they were discussing going to fetch him. Second of all, you’ve waited 16 chapters to bring bella and jasper together and they don’t even have a conversation? They just pounce each other. So dumb. I will not be finishing this story.

This is such a good story! I hate that it’s taking so long for Bella and Jasper to be together and mate, but it’s crazy that all of this has happened so far in only a few short days. The only thing I don’t really care for so far, is how you make Jasper and Peter to talk. Contrary to popular belief, just because you’re southern doesn’t mean you talk like a hick.

Help Needed, Revenge Wanted by airedalegirl1
Is a really good story were Bella is left turning from James bite, even tho Edward sucked the venom out...

Felix for Leah ? Jacob and Jane would be to funny !

oh please don't tell me that Tanya will be Marcus's new mate!