| Reviews for Five Nights At Phantoms: PS12 Version |
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   PhantomFever81 chapter 1 . 2/20/2018 Damn that's deep... the dark story seriously got me on edge and the fantastic writing got me into it. well done mate. see ya later. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 dark. |
| socialgirl378 chapter 1 . 12/26/2015 Well, double fuck. Now Sam will become another animatronic like Danny. Least they'll still have each other. Yay? I wonder how Tuck's feeling now that both his friends are gone. Also, when I saw this oneshot, I thought Danny would be one of the children that got killed by Purple Guy, and that he never knew Sam and Tucker. |
| autumnelliott2002 chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 Will u update |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 I love it. But I also like happy endings, where is the happy ending like in FNAF 3? Please include it! |
| Brittany Bauer chapter 1 . 4/24/2015 What happens next? That can't be the end! Come on, keep going! |
| CorinnetheAnime chapter 1 . 3/23/2015 Nice one-shot! Although, I was sorta expecting a dark ending, but hey, not bad at all! Nice twist! :) A couple of tips: don't insert author notes in the middle of the story. It really does distract the viewers from it. Put them at the beginning or at the end of the story, okay? As for the song, well, I don't wanna be mean, but it's against fanfiction rules to copyright a song in a fanfic story. But hey, I'm saying this nicely, not as a bully or anything. Let's see... *looks over story in search of grammar errors* Wow, you did a great job! Hardly any mistakes anywhere! :) All in all, great story! :) |
| Tarisa chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
| Phantomspirit12 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015 Danny Phantom... Danny Phantom... |
| CallaCaptor chapter 1 . 3/6/2015 AWESOME! |
| Voltaradragoness chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 Woah. Didn't even think of this. Nice job X3 |
| light specter cyan chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 Continue it, please! Is awesome! Please, i want more! |
| Flying Dragonite chapter 1 . 1/13/2015 Not a bad story on the whole, I really like the idea behind it. A few tips though: If you have Author's notes, keep them in the beginning or the end of the fic, don't insert them into the story itself. It's distracting from the story and not really relevant to the story. IF you must, place an asterix and explain what the asterix means in the Author's Note at the end of the fiction. Also, unless the song is actually being heard by the characters, its not really a good idea to insert it into the fiction, for much the same reasons as you shouldn't add in ANs in the middle of a fiction. If you would like your readers to listen to a song, give the song title or link in the Author's Note at the beginning and suggest that they listen to it as they read. Anyways, I hope I didn't come across as too harsh, I really did like the idea. |
| The Fucker Giver chapter 1 . 1/9/2015 PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL, THIS WAS FANTASTIC! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2014 This story is sad ;( but I love it you should continue it on how they punish Danny for trying to escape. |
