Reviews for Bird of Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwww so cute |
![]() ![]() Awwww! That was soooooooo cute! I reread it about 10 times! You are an amazing writer, and you should continue to! I’d love to read more of your stories! Ciao~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutedly adorable. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Very sweet I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this is just adorable... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So many feels I loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg I remember this story! no wonder I love the one you are currently writing ! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story, it warmed my heart like Phoenix flames. My only complaint is the mind reading, that is a bit BS plus the whole thing where when in animagus form, mind affecting ability’s are SERIOUSLY reduced |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooooo cute! 3 |
![]() ![]() Probably too late to say, but I just wanted to make note and point out to you, dear writer, that in the begging when you talk about Harry becoming an animagus for his father and godfather, that it might be more appropriate to mention that it could be for BOTH deceased godfathers, since Remus Lupin also died. Just some (what I hope is taken as) constructive criticism. I love your work, but I just never see lupin’s death mentioned in similar au/crossover fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Well written Story. Regards Lunary |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't mind me, sitting here in the corner, melting into a puddle of goo |