Very well done. I think the ending suits the story well

I absolutely love this fanfic! I can totally see this happening!it definitely shows Kili and Fili's personality. Though, my opinion personally, is that Thorin would never be able to hurt his nephews, whether they deserved it or not. I think that he would just ground them to separate rooms for the day or something... idk.
Anyway...This story is great and thank you for lighting up my world a little brighter with Kili's missing tooth smile!

Awwwwww

I love that! Hurrah for Thorin the majestic uncle! *runs in and randomly hugs the King Under the Mountain*
I just am OBSESSED with all your Hobbit stories! Can you please post some more? Pretty please with a Durin on top?
Because if you don't...THRANDUIL'S MOOSE WILL COME AND EAT YOUR COMPUTER! MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!

Awwwwwwwwww! That was to damn adorable!

I think it felt complete, but I'd personally like to see more of Thorin being relatively nice as opposed to being a royal Jerk. Big brother to the rescue! I liked the talking in between the fighting and Fili's protective nature and Kili not loosing his spirit. I'm glad Thorin understood, though I had few doubts. XD I've still got reading to catch up on!

This was so cute! I loved Thorin saying "I'll teach you how to throw a punch without hurting your hands." I don't know why exactly that stood out to me, but it did! :)

I love it! Reminds me of something me and Sister did a whiel ago... It wasn't as bad as this, and everyone went away unscathed, but fists wanted to fly!

I think you got just right.

It was awesome! Even if this sounds weird, I just loooove fics where Kili gets bullied!
Keep the good work up and you're awesome!

So glad Fili spoke up before Thorin made a bad mistake. I do like the 'Fili rescuing Kili from bullies" fics.

That...was...awesome! I love how Fili jumps to his brother's rescue without even thinking twice. It's so like him! Ooh...and you left it hanging...! I get to imagine what Thorin does to those bullies! Haha! Wonderful one-shot, can't wait for more!