Reviews for Blank Space
paradoxical.001 chapter 9 . 8/9/2018
Oh. My. God.

I have never wheezed so hard before
your humor is amazing and as a result i’m dying
pls continue this masterpiece
angelicana1230 chapter 7 . 5/2/2018
Bruh I'm dying at 'hoe don't do it'
Guest chapter 9 . 1/19/2018
Please please please update soon
Pixiecropse chapter 9 . 10/26/2017
I am so loving this its so funny I love akanes personality and her little obsession with Satan
DeliciousCookie chapter 9 . 5/25/2017
I just read everything so far in one go and really like it. But holy shit the style of writing is as scatterbrained as Akane. It's like a wonky trail, just out of nowhere just turns a sharp left or right and leaves me confused. I'm not sure if you're doing it on purpose to illustrate Akanes mindset but it can be quite annoying sometimes to backtrack and try to figure out what just happened or if something changed.

Grammar is decent, storywise it hasn't really started up yet. Akane can be quite frustrated to read about, I guess you do really illustrate a really and endlessly annoying kid. I hope she matures a bit when she grows up, not that I don't like her personality, she's just currently too stupid for me especially with being reincarnated and know about Naruto.

Soo major gripe for me: Scenes change to abruptly without explanations or without a good transition. Minor gripe: Akane really really don't think things through and is quite the asshole to everyone that cares about her. So far I don't really like her as a person, but it leaves room for character growth/development. I wouldn't be surprised if she lost a limb or accidentally gouged an eye out.

Either way I'm still liking the fanfiction so far and think it has promise, so I'm adding a follow to it.
srirachacha chapter 9 . 5/22/2017
I love this story! Great job and keep it up!
Hisakii chapter 9 . 5/22/2017
I hope I don't have to wait another year for the next update. XD
Hisakii chapter 9 . 5/22/2017
I love this! Your story is hilarious. I'm laughing so hard right now! :D Lol
111segasonic chapter 9 . 5/22/2017
Obi-wan huh? I've never heard anyone call Obito that before. I like it.

haha, she could be all like, "Help me Obi-wan shinobi, you're my only hope."
111segasonic chapter 6 . 5/22/2017
She's such an asshat it's hilarious. XD
HeroineWannabe chapter 8 . 11/27/2016
Heyy i really like this, it's a good and promising stories i just wonder are you not going to continue it?
CherepMikhailov chapter 8 . 10/4/2016
kakashi was one year younger than Obito... right?
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 8 . 8/25/2016
Interesting wonder how this all turns out in the end!
Okumura Hikari chapter 8 . 6/13/2016
Great story! Hope you update soon!
Kaiyira chapter 8 . 5/22/2016
Great story! Haha you made me laugh a lot when Akane went off on her tangents! Especially that chapter when she first met Kushina, Minato, and Team 7 :) Hope you'll update again soon!
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