It's really nice that this gives Clara's perspective too - her desire, however unconsciously, is just broadcasted whenever she's near the Doctor and something about him turns her on. I love that! She's not passive in this story, she takes action to draw in the Doctor (however ethical his response was). The desire is mutual. It's really neat to see a fic like that, because it gives Clara more power, makes them equals, and it's not a lopsided relationship. It's more enjoyable that way.

Oh my god you really have to look over several times to get the full meaning. Thanks for writing this, it's still tugging at my heart and it's delicious honestly let me liveeeee

I love it! This is very well written.

That was brilliant! :D To the point and snappy, which is sort of what makes it good. It's really good.

Mmm, that was rather delicious. ;)

*blushes furiously* Ooh, that was lovely. Please write more!

I'm too curious about the possibilities of things going something like that. (Like how the season would have gone)

Great beginning, however I think that in the future a break (either dashes or something) should be in between the different scenes in the story. It would make it easier to read.

Loved it!

*dies*
Fantastic, thank you for sharing :)