Reviews for not a conventional fairytale
donutlovestea chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Hilarious! Please keep writing shikatema fics
whattadragg chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
Hahaha omg. This is great.
book14reader chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
Ok, I was a little doubtful of it, but by the end of the fic, I was laughing. This is the kind of fairy tale that suits them best
ktbartolini chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
hahaha that was an awesome read.. i could almost hear a very proper English narrator reading this tale
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
This is hilarious as hell! Love it nd ur other stories too! Keep writing! _
TheRedSin chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
That was one hell of a fairy tale. Hahaha. I can so totally imagine it happening. XD
Bichebleue chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
This is an interesting unconventional fairytale, I like it !
You write very well ;)
Mockgirl chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Lol nice chapter
Acapellasky chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
I laugh so hard at this piece, the slap OMG... I don't even know where to start
keep it up, ur a genius!
choikimmy chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
omg i laughed so hard at this, temari being her usual sassy and no-nonsense self, and the slaps were just hilarious. XD nice one!
Shadow Owner chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Hey,
This was amusing. It showcases Temari's brash and fearless personality, and Shikamaru's apathy and calm demeanor in his younger days. Thanks for sharing!

Shadow