This was a great story! I loved the concept and how you handled it, bringing it into a realistic setting. Your writing style is phenomenal, as well! It jumped around, but not in a confusing way. It kept me reading and interested!

Very well written, very enjoyable. I could almost see this actually happening as an episode of the show. Keep up the great writing! I made a good choice to choose this as my first Criminal Minds fanfic to read!

I just found this story (just began reading Criminal Minds Fanfiction), and have to tell you that this was one of the very best I have read so far! You kept so true to the characters in the show, showed the camaraderie between Derek and Reid, and the caring that the whole team has for one another. I loved the fact that you based this on an old Star Trek episode (I am an original Trecker, I was 9 when I watched the first episode that started the whole revolution!) You are a coherent, conscientious writer that apparently knows their grammar, punctuation, and proofreading . . . and it shows in your work. Thank you for gifting us with this story, and now I'm going to look up your profile and see what else you have written. Please, keep up the good work!

This very good! Certainly an interesting twist on things :)

I well-written story I like how you didn't drag the story on, it can get a bit boring. I love how in character everyone was. Great story!

Great story! You did a wonderful job of keeping the characters in character and maintaining suspense.

Aww... I loved that ending so much. Thank you for the wonderful story, it was a pleasure to read.

I love, love, love, love Hubert. I can even picture him.

This was outstanding! You could be a writer for the show. I loathe the writings that are so poorly spelled, using the wrong words, tenses, etc., which pulls you out of the narrative. Thank you for a well-written & very enjoyable story. Keep it up! You have real talent.

This was a great resolution to a very well crafted story. I love that Hotch picked up on Morgan's distress and telling him about Dowd, that was great.

I really liked your story. And I am so glad you made them survive. Thanks for your story :)

Great story!

Nice way to end the story. It sort of came full circle. Now, the team needs a well-deserved the next story. . . . .

Awesome story!

:) Lisa

its great i am sad it ended please write another one soon