This mind control thing feels like chinese novels tournament its kinda gets boring and just kill dr ock and doom and get done with it

Yeah but it was before you bring two owerpowered teens who can tear down the planets

Good story

Well looks like the cat's out of the bag now

will Kara get her powers back will she ever have a baby? I guess the ending will be peter marry his girlsfriends.

Loved the last few chapters. The centered text of the Chapters 89 and 90 was incredibly annoying through. If you can please edit them. So next up Peter and his team will try to stop Ultron from going online. And the whole Superhuman Registration Act finally goes into the next round (through I feel that you should rename it for this story, Superhuman/Metahuman/Bender Registration Act is very cumbersome). Thanks for your good work. Until next time.

Lazy my behind. This chapter was awesome! And had a lot of bomb drops.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Well better lazy than dead . Now the cat's out of the bag and everyone knows about the whole 3 realities thing definitely a lot to process but at least Ultron has been presumably dealt with. And I laughed a bit when Wonder Woman hesitated before saying polyamorous. Now they all finally know Luthor is evil great. Though I'm wondering what the cosmic threat could be.

This fight scene is written very well. It was easy to visualize due to good use of description. Not too much, not too little. One of your best. Awesome job.

Why does nobody think to include the laws of robotics?

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Ultron well I can say with certainty this will not end well either way they are screwed regardless if they stop Ultron or not. Gotta say their team synergy in the training room was pretty good they handle working together much better than before. And Peter and Korra shared a kiss I love those little moments of fluff.

Glad to see you back mate.
One thing though, it's a bit hard on the eyes to read since all your text is centre aligned. I have no clue if that's intentional or not.
Also, your story would benefit greatly from more description. It helps bring the characters to life. Honestly. It will even minimize how much dialogue and narration you need in the story, and thus streamline your writing.

Love it! Great writing skills!

Why do you centralize the text in the more recent chapters? The story itself is great, but the layout of the text is extremely offputting.

It's always a shame when young teens who are supposed to know better cause damage cause in their young and stupid minds the asinine actions are justified all the while giving madmen like Luthor more fuel for his fire. I loved when they all went back and forth with the quips. It's nice to see Kara training although given the lives they lead Kara will eventually have to take the cure. I loved how Korra owned the stupid kids. Flash not being a dick to Peter while at the same time still worshiping is odd but not unwelcome. I have to say i expected Peter to be angry with Bruce for creating that Spider Sense jammer but at least Bruce now knows not to trust Luthor.