its good to see that some of the oder was willing to kill, the death eaters deserved it

I liked the way you set this up, with some of the Order members going undercover to find out just where it was the Death Eaters were hiding.

It was nice to read a story from Benjy's point of view, because we don't know much about him and I personally find him intriguing.

However, the times the writing felt a bit rushed, and I'm not too sure I agree with what you made Fabian and Gideon say. It could be a matter of headcanon! but I always thought they were older than Molly, and Molly is about ten years older than the Marauders and Snape, so the reference to Snape (who wasn't in the Order at that time but who was one of the Death Eaters) felt really out of place, also, saying something tastes as someone else's underwear is just... weird. Their remark about Purebloods seems off as well, considering as they are both Purebloods themselves...

Your characterisation of Moody was spot-on, although I'm not too sure about the fact that he turned into Rosier when they were going to Rosier's mansion. The simple fact that he wouldn't know every nook or cranny in his own house, would render him the object of suspicion very quickly.

I think Benjy might have blown the entire operation by killing that Death Eater. But perhaps that's the foreshadowy part, I'm now thinking that when they do the raid, the fact that the Death Eaters were alerted might just have been what got him blown up...

Moody is so like that :D
You got his character right down.
And I like the Benjy/Marlene part
Nice job and go Tuts!

Criminal. Simply criminal.

By not telling his comrades in arms about what he'd done Benjy risks the Order revisiting the base and being wiped out to the last man. At the very least the base will be deserted ... warned that the Order, someone, had successfully found and infiltrated them.

Typical of the Order, a mob of disorganised laymen. Tourists!

I really enjoyed this. I liked seeing a story with Benji and I really felt his disgust and horror at what happened in the house. Nicely done. :)

"followed my Moody". - "followed by Moody".
"take out the thrash" - "take out the trash".
Poor Danielle.
Poor Benjy too.