Aww, this story was cute without going overboard and it was really cool how you managed to include almost everyone in the story! It felt just like an episode of the show!

A sweet story,, loved it!

Well, that was a cute story!
I can’t believe I didn’t review sooner!
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I wish you would write more naruhina.

i had to stop reading to imagine kakashi writing a fanfic of icha icha. heh.

Lindo

Haha, this was actually quite a funny fanfiction! I like this fanfiction. On that note, I like the little switch of Icha Icha to Fanfiction, for Kakashi! A*

Very touching.

Overall, it was good. Kept me occupied and entertained. But there's something that was bothering me.

The idea and general plot is good and I'd typically wouldn't mind it if it wasn't for the reason behind the actual fight.

I understand why she would be upset but to be mad at Naruto for being the person he is, is ridiculous. She knows he wants to save everyone, and if given the chance, he'd step in and save anyone in need, whether they knew/need it or not. He'd rather save the Genin than have them die while he watched. Not to say Hinata couldn't save them, just that she isn't perfect, she can still make mistakes. So her getting upset to the point that she's constantly calling him an idiot, and reinforcing that point to their own kids, does not seem like a Hinata thing. Sounds more like Sakura - who I must say, is nothing like Hinata.

Like I said, I understand getting upset. But getting upset to the point that they fight in front of their children (another general no-no for parents) is unbelievable and out of character.

It's been shown that Naruto can be, and is, a bit neglectful to his own boy and can easily be implied that he might do it to his own family. Still, this small detail, though trivial, is what bothered me throughout the story since the information was revealed.

I know there's no point in nitpicking, since this is a Drabble made merely to release the idea lodged in your mind. But for some reason that escapes me, I couldn't help but speak my mind. I don't mean to flame, since that isn't my intention. On the contrary, it's a good story and if it wasn't for my own nitpicking, I would've enjoyed it a lot more. Just one small detail but otherwise, it's a job well done.

dat was kawaiiiiiiiiiiiii

dialogues could've been better and maybe a few grammatical mistakes but all in all its pretty darn good.*salutes*

ahahaha this is too adorable. I can never see Naruto and Hinata fighting since I think it'll be too hard to write but you did it so well! Thanks for the story!

Love this story. And you're right, Naruto has never had any example of how a real family works. There are bound to be some road blocks he'll have to deal with.
Until next time,Ja ne!

well, it was amusing

huh well this was a nice lil drabble. glad Naruto went to play with them