Rugby. I still didn't find out what that was. Why is it that in teen/unlock Johnis always a rugby player? Is it the sport equivalent of going to war? I don't know.

I feel like I say the same thing every time... Anyways! That was adorable! :) Oh and I actually have constructive criticism! (My phone won't allow me to paste in the comment box, sorry) When you wrote that John and Sherlock entered the building you said Sherlock noticed John hadn't let go of his arm and then 9 paragraphs down John shoves his hands in his pockets. 5 paragraphs after that you wrote that John "finally let go of" Sherlocks arm... But if he shoved both his hands in his pockets that implies he let go of Sherlock's arm already. It's a small error so no big deal. You are still amazing as always!

Great story. A fab way of John and Sherlock meeting in the younger years.

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! (did I just make an ass out of myself by miss spelling sequel?):$

So excited to see you post again! And this was fantastic - "danger on his lips" is just a perfect theme for these two! (Along with the "twisted idea of fun" - so very *them*!) Hope to see more of you around! Candy. (8of9)

ohmygod this is too cute! will there be a sequel?

Wow ! Liked that ! This is pretty awesome !
Will you write other chapters ? Or is this a oneshot ? It seems to be one but I'm not really sure...

But that was great, as all your work !

I hope to see more Johnlock stories, I love them :-)

Nalou

Oh my god that was one of the best teen!lock I've read, and I've read plenty! I absolutely loved it, well done and thanks!

Wonderful story, sad to see that it's complete. I'd love to read more in this universe...

Awww, that was so cute. The part where Sherlock threatens to set the tanks on fire had me laughing out loud. But I really liked their characterizations in this. Sherlock was so timid, but that seemed appropriate for a teenage version of him. Not even Sherlock Holmes can have complete self confidence when he's in his adolescence. It just worked. And John was exciting in a way that would believably entice Sherlock. It was just a very fun read. Is there actually going to be a second chapter, or did you just forget to put complete? I was putting off reading it because it wasn't finished, but I couldn't help it.