I’m simply speechless, what u wrote is simply too beautiful. Tho Eren dying there caught me a lil off guard but still it’s beautifully written m8! Simply AMAZING

This was terrible. Maybe try doing it a little more in detail

A very sweet story, very sad too but ultimately a beautiful story of hope involving one of my favorite couples. Thank you for your hard work and sharing it with us.

Just wanted to say thank you for this story. It was beautiful and touching. I felt you wrote the characters true to their personalities. I also enjoyed how you wrote in the veteran trio too, Levi's relationship with Mikasa was a nice side to see. I cried when Marco and then Eren went, but somehow still felt uplifted and hopeful at the end. Beautiful job.

I'm so touched by your writing! Thank you!

That was beautiful... and harsh. I loved it. I'm at a loss for words haha. Kudos to you!

I loved this. It reminded me of TFIOS but I didn't really connect with the story as much as I did with your's since I ship Eremika with my life.

I cried so hard! I knew Eren would die, but I cried anyway! This was beautiful! Poor Marco, he never gets to live...You should write more!

My heart hurts...

I love it really good story.

That was utterly amazing... Very well done!

-Andy:3

I loved the story, got a little teared up at the end. It's the same message we get over and over in SNK: the world can be cruel, a lot of people who deserve to live and be happy will suffer and die instead, but the world is also beautiful and therefore you must fight. I don't want this to have just a review or two, dammit! It deserves more. Very well written.

This is so inspiring

This story is idea is original and it's very well written.